Pick four words from the environment around you,
And write four fairly simple sentences,
Using them as the subject...
First attempt, following?
"So, I'm in the kitchen,
Typing away at my laptop,
Perched upon the dining table;
And I wonder why I signed up
For a grammar group?"
None the less, I'll give it a whirl,
Using books, computers, television, and the couch:
"As the unread books gather dust,
The television blares in the background,
And the couch sags under his sleeping weight.
Meanwhile, the computers sit idle,
Frozen upon webpages visited hours ago."
Revision - turning this into 4 simple sentences:
"All of the books are covered in dust.
A television blasts the room with sounds and scenes.
The couch sags under his sleeping weight.
Meanwhile, the computer's screen locks."
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